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TSS Pg. 2 color test by ~Achird:iconAchird:

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©2009 ~Achird
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A colored, edited page two for the Team ShadowSoul comic.

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Nearly done, but not quite- I just wanted to get a few things cleared up. Gosh, I'm so annoying. XD; Sorry for taking so long~ Oh, and sorry I couldn't include the rest of ZeroNova. Maybe Florian and Frost are flanking her so she can't escape. Yeah.

1.) Dialogue? I know Glitch wouldn't sing that creepy song I had at first, but it seems so blank without any text. Um... yeah~ I need something less cliche than, "You can run, but you can't hide! >:[ "
2.) The Glitch in the middle- she's supposed to replace the bannete from the last test. But now it seems all cluttered. Should I remove her? I can upload her separately, but she kinda hides a few nasty mistakes. >>
3.) I have to add sound effects. Any ideas for something slightly more epic than 'Gaaaaawr!' ? I'm trying to think Jurassic Park style, like 'Kkyywyar' and stuff, but none of it sounds cool enough. Help? Anyone?
4.) Dangit, I forgot that ear. D8 Have to throw that in too.

But, um, what do you think of the coloring? I'm very proud of it, especially the backgrounds. :3 I tried to add some epic effects, but mainly it failed. .3.; I hope you like it anyway, and if you see any mistakes, please let me know. =]

...Tired. z3z Sorry for not replying so quickly, messages pile up, I'm afraid. X3; I'm trying~

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~Bloodthirstwolf Jul 15, 2009, 11:13:07 PM
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That's the scariest Girafarig I've ever seen Dx

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GNG and GDW are :heart:
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*prinecess12399 Jul 15, 2009, 11:13:59 PM
Cool great job ^^

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want to see how amy rose die here it is....
HER...FANIT..[link]
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~Achird Jul 15, 2009, 11:23:51 PM
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You betcha! Ravage is the most vicious, psychotic girafarig ever- he eats whatever gets too close to him or moves too quickly. >3 Or he'll stomp and crush it to death. oo; Everything, really.

But he has a lovely smile. 8D
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~racingwolf Jul 15, 2009, 11:26:29 PM
Wow I love the picture! Especially the last panel.
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~LimeSlug Jul 15, 2009, 11:33:10 PM
Florian's gonna come in later, much later. Don't worry about him.

First of all, you did an amazing job on the coloring. I just love the tones and you lines and I especially love how you colored Crofona.

1 - Maybe Glitch can yell "CROFONA!" or something. I dunno.

2 - No, don't remove her .She looks cool. owo But she's charging up an attack and then all of a sudden in the last two panels it's gone so that is inconsistent.Maybe if you had her just sneaking up to attack, but then Ravage gets all excited about eating her so he blows their cover.

3 - I suck at sound effects too. Sorry. Dx

4 - This has nothing to do with what you wrote, but ravage looks like a prancing show horse in the final panel. xD

Th only thing I feel like pointing out is that Crofona looks oddly blurry in the last panel compared to the far off and less detailed figures of Glitch and Ravage. This may have been intentional, but it just looks awkward.

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They're black, they're brown - They're up, they're down
They're in, they're out - They're all about!
They're near, they're far - They're gone, they're here
They're quick and slick, they're insincere

Beware, beware,
Beware, beware beware!
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~Achird Jul 16, 2009, 12:14:39 AM
Okie doke. He's gonna have a super epic entrance, I'm sure. Bwee, can't wait! 8D

Thank you so much! :glomp: I tried so hard to make it look more like a background than my usual stuff~ It means a lot coming from you, master of the epic backgrounds! <3 Thanks, it might've been the color I used for her fur. X3

1- That was my fallback option. When in doubt, yell your enemies name out! X3 Thanks. =]

2- Okay, cool, glad you like her. :3 Oh... I hadn't noticed that before. XD; I just gave her something to make the pose make sense. Thanks for pointing that out. Any ideas how to incorporate it? I'm thinking maybe a red orb flying past Ravage as he's snapping or it dying infront of her in the last panel. The cannibal. XD

3- Oh well, thank you for trying. Onomota-blahblah is hard for roars, it's not easy like Pio-Pio or Bow-wow. D8

4- Pffft- he does! XDDDDD His brain wiring is all messed up, what'd you expect? XP I'm so tempted to throw in a little 'La La la~' there now. XD

Yeah, I blurred the wrong layer by accident. X3; I'll delete it and have it come back to normal. Thank you for all the suggestions, I'll try to incorporate them all. =3
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~Achird Jul 16, 2009, 12:16:45 AM
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Bwee, thank you, Scy, I'm so glad you like this! 8D It nearly killed me. Thanks! <3
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~Achird Jul 16, 2009, 12:17:01 AM
Thank you so much! :hug: :3
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~Bloodthirstwolf Jul 16, 2009, 2:21:04 AM
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....don't wanna get near Ravage...^^;
And his smile must be perdy...with all those white fangs ^^; XD

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GNG and GDW are :heart:
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